Harry Potter: In Memory (The Comes Full Circle Remix)

[remixabot]

Original Fic: In Memory, by et_tu_lj
Remix: In Memory (The Comes Full Circle Remix) [Kreacher, Regulus Black, 200 words, rated PG, no warnings], by theswearingkind

Comments

[sophinisba]

This is great, I love the house elf speech patterns being used for chilling effect rather than for laughs. 9 is especially freaky.

[theswearingkind]

Thank you so much! I always found the house-elves' mannerisms to be kind of creepy, so I wanted to play around with that.

[benebu]

Oh.

I mean, I read and liked, because I really enjoy reading about the relation between Kreacher and Regulus, and here the Kreacher POV is a wonderful bonus because there's such a gap between what he actually says and what we understand.

And then, my eyes fell back on the beginning and I realized. Full circle. Oh. *feels sheepish*

[theswearingkind]

Haha, I actually wondered if anyone was going to catch that! I thought about separating it physically to make it more noticeable, but then I thought it would look strange and kind of break the rhythm of the piece.

here the Kreacher POV is a wonderful bonus because there's such a gap between what he actually says and what we understand.

Thank you so much!

[crevanfox]

I liked how you reversed the order of the ages. The speech patterns are spot on as well. I always liked Kreacher (well after the 6th book at any rate...)

[theswearingkind]

Thank you!

[et_tu_lj]

Ohh! I love this! Thank you so much for the remix! I like the reversal of the order, and the speech patterns are perfect. (which is more than I could manage lol) It's a wonderful remix. =D

[theswearingkind]

Yay! I'm so glad you like it!