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Merlin: Ladies of War (The Whose War Anyway Remix)

Oct 11, 2009 16:05

Original Fic: Ladies of War, by veleda_k
Remix: Ladies of War (The Whose War Anyway Remix) [Gwen/Morgana vaguely, 100 words, rated PG for mention of death, spoilers for episode 1x12], by wordsofastory

( Ladies of War (The Whose War Anyway Remix), for veleda_k )

remix author: wordsofastory, -round 7-, fandom: merlin, original author: veleda_k

Comments 11

aralias October 23 2009, 12:39:37 UTC

i love that first line, though all of the imagery is beautiful. this is a great remix, as well - very sad, and thoughtful, in a way that the original (though excellent) wasn't at all. i love the balance (or lack of) between the substantial and the insubstantial.

wordsofastory November 4 2009, 18:22:37 UTC

Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it.

veleda_k October 23 2009, 14:39:34 UTC

This is lovely; so quiet, sad, and subtle. And the Gwen POV is beautiful. I think I like this better than my original.

wordsofastory October 30 2009, 19:49:04 UTC

Yay! I'm so glad you like it. I really wanted to write something nice for you.

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wordsofastory October 30 2009, 19:52:07 UTC

Thank you!

lady_ganesh October 24 2009, 01:41:37 UTC

Oh, that's lovely.

wordsofastory October 30 2009, 19:52:33 UTC

Thank you!

briar_pipe October 24 2009, 06:35:00 UTC

Ooooh, what a great sequel to the original story! Gwen's point of view, after everything that's happened from 1x12 onward - I love how Gwen sees Morgana's weaknesses and gives in anyway, gives Morgana this for both their sakes (though not for the reasons Morgana thinks). You pack a big punch in a small space. Wow.

wordsofastory November 4 2009, 18:23:15 UTC

Thank you very much! I'm so glad it worked for you.