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sophinisba October 23 2009, 03:50:58 UTC
Gosh, I totally missed seeing this earlier today - I apologize! This is just beautiful, one of those situations where if I quoted my favorite lines I'd be quoting the whole thing back at you, but I think I'll stick with the image of Bill standing on the border and thinking that's enough. I love that he's willing to try so hard for her sake.

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kerravonsen October 27 2009, 23:52:49 UTC
Aw, shucks, thanks.
I loved the whole idea of it; language fascinates me (though I suffer from monolingualism). I hadn't given Bill and Victoire any thought at all, until your story made them snuggle into my heart.

The first sentence that came to me was Languages are not words, they are worlds - after that, I knew I had a story.

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woldy October 23 2009, 19:47:18 UTC
This is lovely!

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kerravonsen October 27 2009, 23:54:00 UTC
Thank you!

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magnetic_pole October 24 2009, 05:09:01 UTC
Ah, very nice! Maggie

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kerravonsen October 27 2009, 23:54:36 UTC
Thanks. 8-)

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benebu October 26 2009, 11:11:56 UTC
It's so beautiful. I love the imagery. It makes me want to hug Bill and Victoire. Thanks for sharing.

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kerravonsen October 27 2009, 23:56:14 UTC
Thank you! The original story made me want to hug them too.

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