Torchwood: A Waiting Game (The Aftercare Remix)

[remixabot]

Original Fic: Let It Go, by donutsweeper
Remix: A Waiting Game (The Aftercare Remix) [Owen/Jack, 100 words, rated PG], by lilfluffykitten

Comments

[allfireburns]

I don't read a lot of Owen/Jack, but I did enjoy this. Owen's characterization especially struck me as very well done; the concern and the somewhat intentional detachment from it feels just right.

[lilfluffykitten]

Thanks for the kind comment - I'm glad you liked this!

[donutsweeper]

Oh wow, I love Owen's take on their D/s relationship!

[lilfluffykitten]

I have to say that when I was reading through your stories Let It Go really jumped out at me. It's just a brilliantly clever idea that Jack would probably need some 'downtime' every so often.

I'm glad you liked this version, thanks! :)

[sophinisba]

almost like the death he flirts with but can’t have

Ooh, I love that. Really enjoyed this and the way it complements the original, with both of them being about the routine and little material things before and after, rather than the scene itself.

[lilfluffykitten]

about the routine and little material things before and after, rather than the scene itself

I loved that idea in the original, there was so much in the preparation. Thanks for commenting!