Torchwood: Metronome (The Temporal Anomaly Mix)

[remixabot]

Original Fic: Metronome, by emmademarais
Remix: Metronome (The Temporal Anomaly Mix) [Jack/Ianto, 100 words, rated PG, spoilers for series 3], by joking

Comments

[canaana]

This reads like smoked glass and cuts to the bone. The ending line's perfect.

[allfireburns]

Oh, ow. I love the pacing of this - you can really feel each second and breath ticking by, and running out.

[joking]

That's very good to hear, since pacing is the element I struggle most with in my writing. I gave each word a lot of thought.