★ Harry Potter: Inevitable (The Predestination Paradox Remix)

[remixabot]

★ [ Hermione Granger/Hermione Granger | PG-13 | 100 words ]
Misuse of the Time Turner.

Original story: The Surprise by projectjulie, 100+100 words.
Remix author: tinheart

Comments

[trascendenza]

It's fic like this that actually tempts me to read these books, hehe.

Mmmmm, selfcest. I especially like she breathes, breathed, need to breathe against her skin my skin our skin.

[melodyunity]

Wow, this is really something. Beautifully written!

My favorite lines:

Moving to the pattern drawn out for us, pressing as in memory we had been pressed.

and

I map the things you can’t learn in books because no words could ever describe. The circle has no beginning but somewhere someone had to make the choice-

That's so perfectly Hermione.

and

I leave her breathless with the knowledge that three hours separate us from this and memory.

*shivers* Lovely.

[projectcyborg]

eeeeeeeeee! I'm so delighted that this one was remixed!

it's a stunning 100 words, stripped down to what's essentially poetry. I love the themes of memory and predestination, which are so beautifully tight.