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isiscolo June 16 2009, 22:01:25 UTC
EEEE! I like this bunches! John really is a, "fuck this shit, let's cut through to what's really going on" sort of guy. And it turns my ambiguous ending into a satisfying one. The last line is awesome.

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sabinelagrande June 26 2009, 10:41:43 UTC
I'm so glad you liked it! I really liked your story, and I had loads of fun messing around with it. :D

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sophinisba June 17 2009, 00:22:20 UTC
I really like this. :)

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sabinelagrande June 26 2009, 10:41:55 UTC
Thank you!

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keerawa June 17 2009, 03:09:11 UTC
Oh, excellent, that's a whole story right there.

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sabinelagrande June 26 2009, 10:42:10 UTC
Thank you!

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sabinelagrande June 24 2009, 00:21:22 UTC
Thank you!

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wychwood June 17 2009, 13:28:06 UTC


I like this a lot! The original is a good story, but it's cutting - it hurts. This is deeply satisfying :) And I like the counterbalance - of course John isn't much on the theory; it works really nicely with Rodney's changing theory/practice ideas from the original.

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sabinelagrande June 26 2009, 10:42:30 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!

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