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maharetr June 17 2009, 22:41:05 UTC
Oh. Oh, yes, was literally what I just said out loud.

He tries, for her.

"I don't want him to be eighteen and doing what I..."

But there are things he can't talk about.

That's perfect, and the whole thing sums up how much they love each other, and how much John is keeping suppressed.

<3!

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emmademarais June 22 2009, 03:56:25 UTC
/waves/

Hi!

I'm glad you liked your remix!

I'm a huge John lover so the original and Adventures on the High Seas just captured me. I had a hell of a time remixing them, but it was worth all the hard work to get just the right 100 words to try to capture a glimmer of the wonderfulness that you had in yours. I only plucked a few bits of words of yours verbatim, but I felt like it was worth it.

I hope you'll write more John like that in the future! you did a wonderful job with him and with Mary and wee!Dean. ♥

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exeterlinden June 17 2009, 23:29:24 UTC
This is wonderful. Perfectly paced, what a great remix.

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emmademarais June 22 2009, 04:11:37 UTC
Thanks! And now you know it was the same author who did yours! /beams/

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