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Harry Potter: Day of Gift

Jun 10, 2009 14:22

Original Fic: A Birthday Gift, by verus_janus/ janus
Remix: Day of Gift [Snape, 100 Words, Rated PG, swears] by restlessme

( Day of Gift, for janus )

fandom: harry potter, -round 6-, original author: verus_janus, remix author: restlessme

Comments 4

methleigh June 14 2009, 00:15:48 UTC

Thank you so much for the lovely remix! I especially like the telling italics. And the noting of his absent friends. Very nice, and I am so glad you chose one with Abraxas. It always makes me happy when he appears.

restlessme June 22 2009, 14:57:17 UTC

Your welcome!
It was really difficult to pick from your stories, because they were all so good.

benebu June 15 2009, 08:53:36 UTC

No no no Severus, do not pick the ring!

I like the way you showed us how lonely Severus could be. The mention of "new friends" who are gone, how wary Severus is of the potentially mocking Gryffindors... It's so sad to think that he sincerely thought himself saved at this moment.

restlessme June 22 2009, 14:58:03 UTC

If it helps, the ring's pretty awesome looking? :)
Glad you liked it.