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lilian_cho June 18 2009, 18:36:21 UTC
This was lyrical and beautiful <3

Extended Brokeback metaphor!

I love this part:

mothers humming lullabies over graves, fields lying fallow and forgotten.

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lilian_cho June 23 2009, 01:50:05 UTC
thank you so much! i was very fond of that line and am glad it came across well. ♥

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theswearingkind June 18 2009, 20:34:51 UTC
OH MY GOD. OH MY GOD. I literally just made a broken noise when I saw what this was a remix of, because it's maybe my favorite thing I ever wrote in bandom, and I am SO SO HAPPY that you chose to remix it.

I love it all, but this: like the closest thing he’d known to free is so beautiful that I literally don't know how to respond.

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theswearingkind June 23 2009, 01:52:31 UTC
I KIND OF COULDN'T RESIST REMIXING THIS, Y'KNOW? 'cause it was so gorgeous and such a perfect meshing of these fandoms we both love and GAH PERFECT.

omg, i am so relieved that last line read well. i wasn't sure after spending forever chopping lines here and there to get down to 100. (i'm rusty! ahaha. hee-larious.)

anyway, yayarms. i'm so glad i could remix this because it and you = ♥♥♥♥.

-- sheerabean

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theswearingkind June 23 2009, 03:46:15 UTC
YOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOU.

I should've known. No one else could have written something that got me quite like this did.

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sophinisba June 20 2009, 22:41:13 UTC
mothers humming lullabies over graves, fields lying fallow and forgotten

That's gorgeous.

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sophinisba June 23 2009, 01:52:56 UTC
aw, thank you, darling! ♥

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