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melodyunity June 14 2009, 22:22:46 UTC
I really liked that -- it's an examination of the dark side of the metaphor from the original. Very River-ish.

And this:

She latches onto her name: names are symbols, and a River is a symbol, but of what she doesn't know. What substance there is under the surface, she can't define, can't quantify. Symbols and words are sly that way.

was just lovely. Wonderful job!

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paperflowered June 24 2009, 00:42:13 UTC
Thanks. :) I'm glad you liked it. I enjoyed reading your original fic very much!

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