Enough (The Cambiata Answer Remix) [Stargate SG-1, Jack/Daniel, G]

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Title: Enough (The Cambiata Answer Remix)
Author: melayneseahawk
Summary: Daniel is dying, and Jack is having an epiphany
Fandom: Stargate SG-1
Pairing: Jack O'Neill/Daniel Jackson
Rating: G
Original Story: Unrequited by capedcrusader92
Notes: General spoilers through 5.21 - "Meridian"; many thanks to muck_a_luck for the delightfully quick beta.

Comments

[capedcrusader92]

Oh, I really like this! It's really neat to see it from Jack's point of view, and I like the way it weaves in and out of the original story. 'Cambiata' is a good phrase to use for it, too.

Thank you so much, you did a lovely job!!!

[melayneseahawk]

I'm so glad you liked it!

[dodificus]

I always love seeing the other side of things like this. Being all sympathetic to Daniel in the original and then suddenly having your heart break for Jack in the remix.

[melayneseahawk]

Thank you.

[paranoidangel42]

This is such an interesting look at Jack's point of view. I love Teal'c asking Jack about unrequited love. This is a lovely, sweet, sad story.

[melayneseahawk]

Thank you! I really wanted to bring as much of the dialogue into the remix as I could.

[sidlj]

Both stories are beautifully told. It's good to find out that Daniel was mistaken, but it's very painful to watch both Jack and Daniel suffering.

He's having an epiphany, and he can't say a word.

Epiphanies can do that to you.

*fingers crossed for a better understanding post-Descension!*

[melayneseahawk]

*fingers crossed for a better understanding post-Descension!*

Me, too!

[stefaniavio]

lovely story!

[melayneseahawk]

Thank you!