Dead Giveaway (The Realization Remix) (Bandom; Ryan Ross/Spencer Smith, R)

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Title: Dead Giveaway (The Realization Remix)
Author: prettykitty_aya
Summary: In between one day and the next, Ryan Ross comes to a few realizations.
Fandom: Bandom
Pairing: Ryan Ross/Spencer Smith
Rating: R (mostly for language)
Original Story: Let Us Be Three by fiddleyoumust
Notes: Just for the record, I wanted Ross to realize that he wasn't alone, but it sounds a little

Comments

[fiddleyoumust]

I am so absolutely in love with this. I love how you gave us the opportunity to see everything through Ryan's eyes. I love how you gave us a glimpses of what happened in the original story, all the while exploring Ryan's motivation for getting involved in what is happening of page between Brendon and Spencer. This is just so perfect.

I particularly adore this part:

"That's what I meant by all the-" more hand flailing. He nearly knocks the pencil can off the desk, but that's not really his fault, "You're all twitterpated."

Spencer looks like Ryan's grown a second head, "Twitterpated? What are you? Five? You've been hanging around Bren-" Spencer trips a little on the name, "-Brendon too much, Jesus." The barely-blush is back, under the smattering of freckles along his nose and cheeks.

Ryan has a moment of blinding clarity. A smile stretches across his face.I love the teasing quality of their friendship, how Ryan can be both delighted that Spencer has a crush and delighted that he gets to tease Spencer about his crush

[prettykitty_aya]

so many &hearts to you! i love your story and it was so much fun (and terrifying!) to take a stab at adding a different dimension to it.

i kind of love bff moments myself, lol, and it's always a ton of fun to write them. thank you so much for your wonderful words :D

[elucreh]

Oh, god. Perfect. Perfect. YesyesyesyesYES.

[prettykitty_aya]

thank you! :DDD

[sinsense]

Ooh, sharp and lovely. I really enjoyed this, especially the little sensory moments of perception and feeling in Ryan's perspective.

[prettykitty_aya]

thanks so much for reading and taking the time to leave a comment :D

[extemporally]

Oh my god, this was awesome. Yes yes yes!

[prettykitty_aya]

so glad you liked it!

[pr_scatterbrain]

This was utterly perfect.

[prettykitty_aya]

thank you! :D