Of Cheek-Gnawing and Leg-Pasting (The Caffè Espresso Remix) [DBSK; Yunho/Changmin, Jaejoong/Yoochun]

[biz_munchee]

Title: Of Cheek-Gnawing and Leg-Pasting (The Caffè Espresso Remix)
Author: mormorando
Summary:
To: Yunho
From: Jaejoong
how long do u think i should wait b4 i can start liking some1 else?
Rating: R
Fandom: DBSK
Title, Author and URL of original story: of book stores and word vomit by maskyouwear
A/N: Thank you so much to peppery, kallistei, and various other people for looking this

Comments

[hoyah]

that was ridiculously adorable and idek i teared up when changmin broke it off because he is a stupid stupid thing i thought yunho was the really dumb one and ee yunho kindergarten teacher is too cute and sweet and he is definitely no shot of espresso. also i am now 15 minutes late leaving work because i couldn't stop reading this.

[mormorando]

aww, but he came around in the end! have faith in the homin. :D

[yuxo]

...so...

THIS IS SO AMAZING ASUOEWPADSJDSSPIPIOWOIPDASFJ*(&efIOUwepoiujpwiojfpOIJSPDIOUJPwiotu8p94wut GAAAAAAAAAH well, basically, jaejoong is my favorite because he's just a spaz and he never stops talking and freaking out and is adorable because he's just wonderful and the past!jaeho was great because awwwww the best of friends always no matter what and yoochun was introduced and HAHAHAHAHAHA OH YOOCHUN THE WORD VOMIT OMG I LAUGHED OUT LOUD IN REAL LIFE and yunho is just as sweetheart who loves children ridiculously and junsu IS THE REAL MASTERMIND BEHIND OPERATIONS GO JUNSU WOOOOOOO and changmin was such an insecure little dummy for dropping yunho but he really is a sweetheart and i think they should have plenty more dates that translate to watching movies on a couch which translates to making out and something extra and idk at one point all of them stole my heart and i couldn't pick a favorite and omg this one sentence is carrying on forever SO

[mormorando]

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH how do i even reply to this. i'm glad you liked it so much! :))) i kind of wish junsu could've played a bigger role, but he left his mark nonetheless.

crying this comment is so pathetic but i'm just really happy it worked for you and that the characterization wasn't atrocious. THANK YOU SO MUCH. :D :D :D

[binmusic]

this is seriously all kinds of awesome. first off, even though i'm a huge homin fan, i really just loved all the characters in it. i got about two sentences in and read jaejoong's text and knew immediately i was going to love him. he's such a nervous wreck that it's adorable. and rofl at yunho the kindergarten teacher. he's such a cute dork, always a little fail and so yunho. changmin's appropriately funny and cool, and i really just love the different types of personality you put into his fic.

and i think my favorite lines are : "You are not a shot of espresso. You are a vanilla latte with extra whipped cream. Or a hot cocoa with extra whipped cream on bad days."
♥ ♥

[mormorando]

eeee yay thank you so much! :) jaejoong's my favorite so i have to give him a bit of strife. and yunho totally orders girly drinks at the coffee shop. :D

[mousapelli]

awww, this was completely awesome. I love Changmin and Yunho and Jaejoong and Yoochun AND Junsu more than life.

even when Junsu likes tits. ♥♥♥

[mormorando]

junsu is just a tits kinda guy! :D :D :D

[konzatsu]

dsjdnfmh i adored the original version of this and omg i love this remix just as much. spazzy jaejoong is just about the cutest thing ever, except maybe spazzy yoochun. emo min made me T_T but yay for happy endings. <333

also, yunho would SO end up a kindergarden teacher if he wasn't a big pop star. XDD

[mormorando]

\o/ yay so happy you liked. also i refuse to accept that au!yunho would be involved in any vocation that doesn't deal with kids.