Like an Onion Inside Out (The Doctor, the Queen, and the TARDIS Remix) (Narnia & Doctor Who; PG-13)

[addison_rock]

Title: Like an Onion Inside Out (The Doctor, the Queen, and the TARDIS Remix) (The Chronicles of Narnia and Doctor Who; The Doctor/Susan Pevensie; PG-13)

Title: Like an Onion Inside Out (The Doctor, the Queen, and the TARDIS Remix)
Author: spiralledsSummary: Sometimes endings are just the beginning

Comments

[lizzie_marie_23]

Oh wow! This was fantastic. I love the Doctor and Susan together and you redid Falls the Shadow beautifully.

[spiralleds]

Thank you! I'm so glad that they worked as a pair and it worked at a remix.

[aralias]

i love this so much. THIS much (which is a lot).

it's a great remix, firstly - taking what was an interesting concept and a weird pairing from the original and making sense of all those tiny moments - did it fit together easily, or were you sitting there with sentences printed out on tiny bits of paper?

secondly - it's also a great story and i grinned like a loon when aslan showed up and quoted brigadoon and called the doctor a child and his reaction to that (which is so good, particularly after all this lonely god stuff we have to put up with at the moment). oh, and obviously, this thirteen is just so scottish and lovely, and obviously different, but also obviously the doctor. great canon doctors too - absolutely voice-perfect, and i love the bit where rose asks whether she'd still be along for the ride if susan had said yes. fantastic, as it were.

[spiralleds]

Thank you! Getting voices right is always a huge thing for me. And I'm tickled that you enjoyed all the little details I folded in. (I cracked myself up with the Brigadoon bits.)

As for the reorganizing of the original story, it mainly just clicked. There were times I had the original right next to me to weave things in, but at the point that I started writing, I knew in the big picture what I wanted to do.

Originally I wasn't going to remix it, as I hadn't done many crossovers and I'd never written in either the Doctor Who or Narnia fandoms, but the idea of the original story as well as what I'd do with it (the multiple meetings, the Doctor's last regeneration) just wouldn't go away, so here we are.

[glinda_penguin]

Oh my, Susan and the Doctor! Adventures and heartbreaks and canons intertwining.

[spiralleds]

Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoy the ebbs and flows of it.

[musesfool]

I enjoyed this.

[spiralleds]

Yay! I know you've mentioned not having a familiarity with Doctor Who fandom, so I'm glad it worked even without that.

[kate_swynford]

Brilliant story. I loved your Susan and all the Doctors, especially Thirteen.

[spiralleds]

Thank you! I was a little worried about creating Thirteen, so I'm glad he works. (And the others too!)