The Time Has Come to Be Gone [Supernatural; Ash/oc, Ellen/Bobby, Ellen/William, PG-13]

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Title: The Time Has Come to Be Gone (Augmentation Counterpoint Mix)
Author: Vesper (Regina) [vespertanmer]
Summary: Threads of lives crossing.
Rating: PG-13
Fandom: Supernatural
Pairing: Ash/oc, Ellen Harvelle/Bobby Singer, Ellen Harvelle/William Harvelle
Spoilers and/or Warnings: All Hell Breaks Loose Part 2; ( skip) sensuality; mild supernaturally-based

Comments

[liz_marcs]

Fascinating remix of the original. I like your use of mystery, and I love how you weave the whole idea of fate and free-will together. It actually reads something like a toss-up whether Clotho pulled the threads, or if Ellen did it herself.

Which, hopefully is what you intended.

A good read, solidly written, nicely plotted, and a good use of mystery. Thank you.

[vespertanmer]

I'm pleased that you think this utilized mystery well. I liked the ambiguity, in the original, of whether or not Claudia did pull the threads, so that was something I really wanted to keep. Thanks for commenting!

[extraonions]

I really liked the way you wove the three fates into this, and how natural the hitchhiking scenes seemed and also framed the main part of the story.

[vespertanmer]

The framework was important to me, since I really wanted to explore where Claudia had come from and where she was going. I was really drawn to her, since I love mythology, and it was a pleasure expanding on the concept of the Fates from the original story. Thank you for commenting!

[faile02]

That was eerie and beautiful.

[vespertanmer]

Oh, thank you. I'm pleased you thought so!