Three Kisses Jo Never Saw Coming (World Enough and Time Remix) [Supernatural; Sam/Jo, Dean/Sam]

[jay_zelenka]

Title: Three Kisses Jo Never Saw Coming (World Enough and Time Remix)
Author: soundingseaSummary: Even the past she could once conjure up, the one where she has a mom who smiles and a dad who comes home in a whirlwind of leather and gun oil, recedes into hazy memory

Comments

[rivkat]

Oh, yay! I love Jo and all the different ways it goes for her. I'm really struck by the idea of her making a deal for Ellen, which Ellen would of course never want her to do. It shows the perversity of the hunting life, with the natural order reversed and ignored; children dying before parents, life bought with Hell. And I always love accidental discovery, as in the last part.

Thank you so much!

[soundingsea]

Glad you enjoyed! Your story is nifty, and I enjoyed turning it ever-so-slightly sideways.

[livrelibre]

This was nicely done!

[soundingsea]

Thanks! :)

[extraonions]

Wonderful Jo voice.

[soundingsea]

Thanks! First time writing her, so I'm glad it worked.

[zooey_glass04]

Oh, I love this! There's a really strong sense of grief running through it, and also a really clear sense of Jo as a character. I liked Jo's awareness of the fact that the demon is in a human's body, and my heart broke at her making the deal for Ellen. Her imagining the gravestone as her father's was also a great touch.

All round brilliant fic - thanks for a great read!

[soundingsea]

I'm glad the mournful tone worked for you. Thanks for reading and commenting.

Jo is a character we didn't see enough of, in my mind, so I enjoyed writing her for this.