I Never (The But Just This Once Remix) (Marvel Comics, Scott/Warren, PG-13)

[steelydanrydell]

Title: I Never (The But Just This Once Remix)
Author: second_batgirl
Summary: And then Warren kissed him.
Rating: PG-13
Fandom: X-Men Comics - X-Men First Class
Spoilers and/or Warnings: Underage drinking
Title, Author and URL of original story: I Never by harmonyangel

Comments

[harmonyangel]

Yay! This is AWESOME, and totally the fic that I always imagined happening in the background of my own. Trying to keep an omniscient, floating point of view, far from the characters' thoughts, was the hardest and most frustrating part of my fic, and I'm so glad to see inside Scott's head here, to see him freaking out but also dealing with it (like he's dealt with every other strange thing that's happened in his life). And Warren is charming and adorable, and the kissing is super hot, and... yay! Awesome, awesome fic. I'm so glad this exists!

[second_batgirl]

I am so glad you liked it, because your original was amazing and I adore you tons. ♥ ♥ ♥

[second_batgirl]

They are adorable!

Thank you so much!

[ficwize]

This was adorable. I love the banter between the two boys. And Scott's inner thoughts were flummoxed, which was awesome, because he's usually so in charge. :D

Great job!

[second_batgirl]

Thank you so much for all the help with it! ♥ ♥

[tartanshell]

Aww, this is so awesome! And absolutely adorable. I love young!Scott out of his element, and you've nailed his voice here. Bravo!

[second_batgirl]

Thank you!

[likeadeuce]

I was waiting to comment, because I read this in advance, but wanted to make sure I say again how much I love this. Great use of the characters, and really believable Scott-POV.

You should post this to xmenfirstclass!

[second_batgirl]

Seriously, thank you again for all the help!

I really should do that.

♥ ♥ ♥