Comments | remixredux08: Where Boys Fear To Tread (Waiting on a Friend Remix) [Harry Potter; Remus Lupin/Sirius Black, NC-17]

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Where Boys Fear To Tread (Waiting on a Friend Remix) [Harry Potter; Remus Lupin/Sirius Black, NC-17]

Apr 17, 2008 19:45

Title: Where Boys Fear To Tread (Waiting on a Friend Remix)
Author: entrenous88
Summary: When Sirius fears changing their relationship, Remus tells him he'll wait for him. But after leaving Hogwarts, Remus finds working in Diagon Alley and exploring newfound freedoms make for a more complicated summer than he expected.
Fandom: Harry Potter
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fandom: harry potter, remix author: entrenous88, character: james potter, rating: nc-17, character: sirius black, character: peter pettigrew, character: remus lupin, pairing: remus lupin/sirius black, original author: lupinslittlesis

Comments 19

elsane April 20 2008, 02:09:41 UTC

Lovely. I particularly liked the drunken scene.

entrenous88 April 27 2008, 10:16:44 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

mindabbles April 20 2008, 07:27:54 UTC

Very nice! All of the details of Remus' job were lovely. I also liked the roles that Peter and James played.

entrenous88 April 27 2008, 10:19:28 UTC

I'm happy you liked the bits about Remus working at Fortescue's; those scenes and details were great fun to write. Great to hear as well that you liked the appearances Peter and James made. Thanks very much for your fb!

inksheddings April 20 2008, 16:38:37 UTC

Oh, quite lovely.

entrenous88 April 27 2008, 10:19:44 UTC

Thank you!

lls_mutant April 20 2008, 18:29:31 UTC

I want ice cream now!

Seriously though, THANK YOU. This was absolutely lovely.

I went back and reread the original fic again- I haven't read it in over a year. It's funny, because after getting past the Sirius-Peter-kelpie adventure, I really noticed that I had sort of given Remus reactions that were implying a lot of other things were happening in his head, but because I'd stuck so strictly to Sirius's POV I'd never even really thought about them.

I really like how you wrote James (particularly incorporating the HBP "furry little problem" aspects and all the attitude that comes with it), but I LOVE that you kept Peter the way I like him- a true Marauder. Thank you. I really liked Florian and Freddie as well- they were genuinely nice people without being sugary-sweet.

But what I want to thank you for the most is this little section:

He held Sirius tighter, making soothing nonsense sounds. He had told Sirius he would wait for him, and he was prepared to do just that -- but it could be that possibility would be taken away ( ... )

entrenous88 April 27 2008, 10:30:28 UTC

Thank you so much for your detailed and generous feedback ( ... )

tourdefierce April 21 2008, 01:42:55 UTC

Okay. Love this!! The ice cream bits are so wonderful and I loved the drunken scene and all the little sexy bits were so wonderfully hot.

Well done.

entrenous88 April 27 2008, 10:30:57 UTC

Yay, thank you so much! I'm so happy to know you enjoyed the story.