D is for Draco (and Done Deeds) [HP; several characters; PG]

[tupocalypse]

Title: D is for Draco (and Done Deeds)
Author: ladyblack888Summary: He knew his mother would take care of him as long as she could, that she'd protect him of everything she could

Comments

[zvi_likes_tv]

I like how you made your remix DH compliant, and I like how you refocused on the parental relationship. It's very atmospheric, in a good way.

I like it.

[lilian_cho]

Thank you mystery remixer!

I like the way you pull the story together, and the adjustments you make to make it DH-compliant =)
I especially like the meeting with Tonks and how he gave the brooch to Teddy in the end.

And drunk, honest Lucius is always fun *g*

Good job =D

[midnitemaraud_r]

Wow - I can't believe I'm sympathizing with Draco. :-P I really liked him here, though, and I love how he gives the pin to Teddy. A nice moment of light in an otherwise sad portrait. But what struck me was a sort of parallel to his own relationship with his mother - all the trinkets and sweets Narcissa would send him, something Teddy will never have, and how he passed this trinket from Tonks on to Teddy, even though Teddy will never know it was from Tonks, Draco will, and somehow that's enough.

[demonqueen666]

That was really moving. I like the focus on the mother-child relationship, and how it's sort of echoed again in the story of Teddy and how he will never know his mother. Just a really well-done story, all around.

[liz_marcs]

Awwww, this made me sniffle. I loved the focus on Draco's relationship with his mother and his mother's family.

And that ending was simply perfect. What a lovely, touching story.