Bare Skin of All Her Lovers (Love in Fire and Blood Remix) [SGA; Elizabeth/Ronon/Teyla; PG-13]

[jay_zelenka]

Title: Bare Skin of All Her Lovers (Love in Fire and Blood Remix)
Author: poisontaster
Summary: Home is a heart which moves.
Rating: PG-13
Fandom: Stargate: Atlantis
Warnings: Threesome, het and slash.
Spoilers: None.
Original Story: Bare Skin of Her Lovers by sugargroupie
AN: Thank you, O my beta.

Comments

[cupidsbow]

The language is in this is just lovely -- She opens the earthenware dish to her left and removes two teaflowers, dry, knurled things the color of dust. And I like the way you've brought the story back around to the beginning of the original, but this time with such a present sense of coming home.

[poisontaster]

Thank you so much! That sense of homecoming was very much what I wanted to bring to the fore. I'm so pleased it worked. :D

[sugargroupie]

I was hoping that someone would remix this story and I am so pleased at the result, thank you! I really like that your story is a prologue of sorts, to mine, and that it gives small peeks into Teyla's relationships with Ronon and Elizabeth separately before they all come together. And how much did I love that it was Teyla who initiated it, and the method in which she did? So awesome.

I appreciate this story more each time I read it. Thank you for the effort. *g*

[poisontaster]

*beams* I really enjoyed the original story and this was a pure pleasure to remix. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. It's really the first Teyla-centric piece I've written, though I've written Teyla before and it just reminded me how much MORE I need to write her. :D

[dirty_diana]

This is deeply lovely, quiet and strong. Like Teyla.

[poisontaster]

Thank you very much!

[kassrachel]

She was unsure of the wisdom of this maneuver at all. Her relationship with Elizabeth is very different from her relationship with Ronon, an understatement of thought that makes her smile. Still, they have both expressed a certain...vulnerability about sharing her with each other. Nothing overt. Nothing directly spoken, but Teyla would not have served her people nearly so well if she had not learned to hear more than simply the words that come from another's lips.

Oh, lovely.

I really like the way you've expanded and extended the original, shown us what led up to it and how they came to be who they are with one another.

[poisontaster]

Thank you so much!

[gryphonrhi]

This is really lovely and comforting. Thank you.

[poisontaster]

Thank you. So glad you enjoyed it!