thirteen photographs (the via crucis remix) [Harry Potter; Sirius/Remus]

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Title: thirteen photographs (the via crucis remix)

Author: loneraven

Summary: A love story in fourteen parts.

Rating: PG-13

Fandom: Harry Potter.

Title, Author and URL of original story: train de grande vitesse, by glass_icarus.

Comments

[elsane]

Lovely, sensual, and sharp by turns, and I love how you manage to evoke so many unspoken things -- so that reading the story almost feels like looking at photographs.

Loved Ram Patil's wedding and Sirius's thoughts about pain in particular, and the darkening thread of the war running through it all. Very evocative.

[ex_thissuga]

just a quick "wow, am I crying in the best way", and also:

“I miss you,” Sirius says into the open air, and hopes his voice will carry on the trade winds, carry with the storm across the world.

is beautiful phrasing, as is:

He leans against it, his full weight held up, supported, for a few seconds, and murmurs, “I love you,” into the wood.

[sambethe]

This is really lovely. I enjoyed how you expanded on the first, taking brief mentions and breathing new life in to them. I also particularly liked how this captures all of them in mundane moments, simply living life.

And this:

but before they’re quite gone, he sees Peter give Remus a new copy of the magazine, not yet besmirched by Harry’s jammy fingertips, and notes the quiet smile that passes between them.

That nearly broke my heart.

[highfantastical]

You BROKE me. Oh, so wonderful. This is like... poetry.

[such_heights]

Oh, stunning. Absolutely gorgeous, so many moments of quiet beauty, the way you cover a whole life, while the end gets nearer and nearer.