The ACME Judgment Company (Uncloseted Remix) [M*A*S*H, Hawkeye/BJ, Hawkeye/f, PG]

[lex_zeppelin]

TITLE: The ACME Judgment Company (Uncloseted Remix)
AUTHOR: iamsabSUMMARY: "You want disapproval? You disapprove. I'm not the ACME Judgment Company." - BJ, "The More I See You

Comments

[msilverstar]

You reminded me all over again about why I have a Giant Crush on Hawkeye Pierce -- he's open to anything and pretty good at knowing himself. Book, movie and TV show versions all work that way. I think you got his voice exactly right, I could hear his voice saying your lines. Really great job!

BTW, no blow dryers until the 70s.

[laurificus]

Wow. This is fantastic--I love outsider POVs done well, and this one really is. The dialogue is excellent, and I love how quiet and settled this is, without glossing over the harder parts of their lives.

[kassrachel]

Ohhh. I'm clutching at my heart, I'm near tears over here; this is fucking fantastic.

she's never known Doctor Ben Pierce to be monogamous, not now, not ever. Faithfulness, on the other hand -- the kind where he'd throw his body between a friend and a bullet -- he's got in spades.

God. That's just it; that's exactly the distinction.

And their conversation, their confrontation. BJ and Hawk and oh, oh, WOW.

[iamsab]

That distinction there was prodded from me by my beta furies, who totally helped me figure out just what it is that makes Hawk so bad at relationship commitment despite being so very good as a loyal partner, and friend.

[argosy]

It's been a long time since I've watched Mash, but this brought back really great memories. I love how you made it complicated for everyone in involved--how Hawkeye really does love them both. Really great story.