myopia, and how the present takes hold (a remix from lightyears away) [BSG: Kara, Leoben, PG-13]

[snoop_doggett]

Title: myopia, and how the present takes hold (a remix from lightyears away)
Author: smercy
Summary: "Kara can match any robot's silence."
Fandom: Battlestar Galactica
Pairing: Kara, Leoben
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: I don't own Battlestar Galactica and I can't own it and I won't make any money from this.
Original Story: taking cue (past holds on) by bantha_fodder

Comments

[bantha_fodder]

Oh, this is awesome! I never would have thought of Leoben in this, but it works so perfectly and isn't that what Remix is all about?

Thank you so much for this.

[bantha_fodder]

I just wandered by to see if you'd updated with your name, and are you kidding me? I'm sitting here in shock to see that you're my sekrit remix author.

[thedaytheystop]

Oh, this was beautiful! I wasn't familiar with the original so I read it really quick first - and I love how this slots in with that, through the hybrid and Leoben's eyes, but it could also stand alone! Wonderful job!
I love the last line! :)

[liminalliz]

Lyrical and absolutely gorgeous; I love this! Very beautifully written and nicely weaved around Pen's original fic. Excellent!

[rose_griffes]

Lee dislikes imbalance, a natural inclination.
I think I'm in love with this sentence. Oh, Lee...

Boomer will learn to reassimilate. Sooner would be better. She still denies God's will, denies His very existence.
All the pieces you brought in for this are beautifully fitted together. Foreshadowing Boomer's sad continuation, the meetings between Kara and Leoben, putting in her connection to Helo. I really liked all of this.

[fallingtowers]

This is slightly unsettiling, but eerily beautiful. Great job!