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dswdiane April 19 2008, 23:54:07 UTC
Very funny remix of a very funny original story. Loved your metaphors/similes and pop references. Loved "weeping in their graves." Nicely done.

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amonitrate April 26 2008, 18:26:19 UTC
thanks Diane, and thanks for looking at it while it was in progress.

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lferion April 20 2008, 05:19:51 UTC
Oh my. Brilliantly, painfully funny. And peculiarly plausible.

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amonitrate April 26 2008, 18:27:10 UTC
Thanks! Amusing alliteration, my favorite.

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mackiedockie April 20 2008, 21:22:07 UTC
Yeah! I love Joe's foolhardy grin!

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amonitrate April 26 2008, 18:27:31 UTC
I'm glad you like it! And thanks again.

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unovis April 22 2008, 03:54:47 UTC
The Immortal Smothers Brothers? Hah!
Nice pick up of the slap and tickle between them. Poor harassed Joe is funny, put on the spot. Nice job.

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amonitrate April 26 2008, 18:28:13 UTC
Oh, so glad you liked it. I was nervous.

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macgeorge1 April 24 2008, 17:59:06 UTC
What a hoot! Poor Joe, but I love a giggling Duncan and a put-upon Methos. Very nice.

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amonitrate April 26 2008, 18:28:30 UTC
Thanks! Humor is so hard, I'm glad it was funny!

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