The Spaces In Between (Failure to Meet and Mend Remix) [Harry Potter; Lily, Remus; PG]

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Title: The Spaces In Between (Failure to Meet and Mend Remix)
Author: inksheddings
Summary: Lily trusts her instincts.
Rating: PG
Fandom: Harry Potter
Warnings: None.
Spoilers: None.
Title, Author and URL of original story: Wrapped Around by osmalic.
A/N: Title stolen from Toad the Wet Sprocket's "Something's Always Wrong." I really enjoyed working on

Comments

[osmalic]

Oh, WOW. This is truly amazing, and I love that you brought something that I only thought of but you brought your own images and your own story into it, made it truly your own. That it was my story that gave you that idea, that it gave you all these words is something that awes me, because you gave life to a Remus and Lily that I only ever thought of in parts, and gave them so much. And may I also say that I absolutely love the Marauders' interaction, especially how they bantered but still forecast the impending tension that the war will bring them. And oh, the ending...just made me want to weep. O

This is amazing, I love what you wrote, and not only because you remixed mine--but completely on its own, devoid of what's mine or yours. This is a great story. Thank you for sharing!

[inksheddings]

Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed this. When I read the original, the section with Remus just hurt, and while I felt for him so much I also couldn't help but desperately want him to pick Harry up. That led me to Lily, and well...

So thank you for such an affecting story. It was a pleasure to remix.

[sophinisba]

I really liked this, especially the way you wrote Lily's emotions as she was watching the others together.

[inksheddings]

Thank you so much!

[paranoidangel42]

This is so sad. Oh, Remus.

[inksheddings]

I know, sorry about that. And thank you!

[sambethe]

So much heart heartbreak in so small a space. I think I need a good cry now.

[inksheddings]

Sorry! XD

And thank you so much.