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iliveforsleep August 23 2010, 22:43:47 UTC
I liked the pictures and thought the story was well thought out.

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aledstrange August 24 2010, 12:05:43 UTC
Thank you! :)

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simsinthecity August 23 2010, 23:53:46 UTC
I love this story. I don't know if I've ever told you, but I really like how you've put together the Sims from two neighborhoods without messing up the dynamic between characters already established. There's not too much change in how you'd think they'd act, but it all really still comes together well.

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aledstrange August 24 2010, 13:07:09 UTC
Thank you much, I really appreciate your comments <3

In general, the storyline is very true to how things played in game (one particular game, long time ago). I was just letting flow by itself, (without ACR or directly forcing relationships), and all the things and relationships that happened naturally there seemed so right and appropriate, I ended up falling in love with it. It's great to know that I can somehow express that in the written story too. (even if it could be a bit blah in some characters like Buzz, who are supposed to be very mean, but usually aren't as much in game lol)

Thanks for reading! :)

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simtopi August 24 2010, 04:11:34 UTC
I agree, you merge the sims from the different neighbourhoods well. And it was really nice seeing a Remix update today! :D And especially from the kids points of views, I think you do it so well... running off to check out the "creepy old mansion" is something kids would do.

I need to go back and reread a few of these chapters. I've also caught up with Who's Terrano a while back too. :)

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aledstrange August 24 2010, 13:17:20 UTC
Thank you so much! :)
I'm glad this update came out quickly (less than three weeks!! that's like a record for me ROFL). I'm trying to reach Alex's Bday soon, that's when the story gets more interesting, imo :) (besides, teen-Alex is inspiring <3 I even have some of the future parts drafted already lol)

I'm vary happy you're enjoying the story. Thanks for reading and commenting! <3

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katee412 August 25 2010, 02:02:46 UTC
Aww, this was such a sweet chapter. You captured the eagerness of childhood while balancing it with the kid's individual characters. I'm looking forward to watching them as they grow up in your story.

And your pictures are just gorgeous :D

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aledstrange August 25 2010, 18:04:37 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm really happy you liked it. :)

There's only one more part before Alex's Bday, so hope to have it done soon. I'm excited to move into teen years, that's when their relationships develop more seriously, and a lot of other charterers join the show too.

Thanks for reading and commenting <3

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muslemura August 25 2010, 10:17:36 UTC
Your pictures are so beautiful!
I loved the kid p-o-v, they are such great characters :)

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aledstrange August 25 2010, 17:40:05 UTC
Thank you so much! :)
Glad you enjoyed this part. I love this kids and was missing them in the story! (all the latest part were about other households).

Thanks for reading and commenting. <3

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