Fic: Mnemonic (One Man Army Mix) [Stargate Atlantis; John Sheppard; PG]

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Title: Mnemonic (One Man Army Mix)
Author: rokeon
Summary: Three things that never happened to Sojourner.
Fandom: Stargate Atlantis
Character: John Sheppard
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: Everything you recognize belongs to the SciFi channel and the original writers, not me.
Original story: Mnemonic, or Four Ways John Sheppard Didn't Lose His Mind, part 1, by cupidsbow

Comments

[minnow1212]

Oooooh, interesting. I really liked where you took this remix--I wasn't expecting the final bit. And the idea of automated defenses against Teyla--very interesting.

[anonymous]

What a wonderful extension/elaboration of that first story in cupidsbow's Four Things! It felt so much like one of those old-fashioned hard science fiction stories. I really enjoyed reading it!

[sheafrotherdon]

Oh this is so great! A little dark and definitely remote and yet a perfect extension of who Sheppard is. Wonderful job.

[cupidsbow]

I really, really love this. Above and beyond how brilliantly you presented the other side of the story, this works so well in its own right.

The part that fascinates me most is the limited amnesia. On and off, I've been thinking about picking this story up and continuing it, and while I had also decided John was enhanced, becoming a meta-human after the explosion, I hadn't thought he might have such limited amnesia. It's a brilliant idea though.

Thank you.

*goes to re-read*

[tieleen]

Very very interesting, especially the last one. I could see that happening, and I wish I could see what happens next.