Fic: Fix (Power Corrupts Remix) [Buffy the Vampire Slayer: Dawn Summers]

[dangermars]

Title: Fix (Power Corrupts Remix)
Author: aliaspiral
Fandom: Buffy the Vampire Slayer
Summary: Dawn held the universe in the palm of her hand, and she was going to shape it to her liking.
Rating: R
Warnings: major character deaths
Spoilers: The Gift
Disclaimer: All hail Joss, who owns everything mentioned.
Title, Author and URL of original story: Absolute

Comments

[liz_marcs]

Wow. This is positively fantastic, even without reading the original. It's both chilling and creepy as Dawn keeps trying to fix it over and over again.

Truly perfection in how it captures Dawn right at that moment on the tower as she keeps trying to work out how to fix everything. And the fact her mother is still there...brrrrrr.

[aliaspiral]

Thank you so much! I had a great time writing it. I also fixed the link to the original drabble.

[bastardsnow]

This is brilliant. I absolutely love it.

[aliaspiral]

thank you!

[47_trek_47]

Wow, that was awesome. I know, that's the lamest feedback ever, I'm sorry. But it really was awesome.

[aliaspiral]

hey, no feedback is ever lame, all feedback is GOLD. and im so glad you liked it!

[kindkit]

This is amazing. Just beautifully done, and I found myself feeling so sorry for Dawn even as the horror mounted up. Plus, you handle the complexity of time in this story (the way Dawn keeps remaking history) brilliantly.

(By the way, your link to the original story isn't working. And I've love a chance to read the original, too!)

[kindkit]

There's an extra " at the end of the link. Ill fix it when I can, but until then, you can just cut and paste, delete the ", and hit enter to go to the original.

[a2zmom]

Wow, completely fantastic. I love Dawn's complete hubris here, convinced that she can reorder the universe to her liking.

[aliaspiral]

we all wish we could reorder the universe. Dawn just had a way to try it.

thanks!