fic: soon again gone (hurry up and wait) [Stargate: Atlantis; John Sheppard/Rodney McKay; PG13]

[jimnpam]

Title: soon again gone (hurry up and wait)
Author: Ailly/justskindeep
Summary: Every couple of years, John just dropped unconscious without any apparent explanation. And a few times with the wrong explanation.
Fandom: Stargate: Atlantis
Pairing: John Sheppard/Rodney McKay
Rating: PG13
Disclaimer: These all belong to a bunch of guys who aren't me.
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Comments

[minnow1212]

I liked this a lot! Especially Ronon's "gropey-feeley" and Teyla:

"The euphemism was 'speaking with the Ancestors'."

Hee!

[justskindeep]

I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[wildestranger]

Aww, wonderful. :)

[justskindeep]

Thank you! ^_^

[mixed_reviews]

Really confusing, for me. What am I missing!?

[cupidsbow]

You really need to read the original first: http://cupidsbow.livejournal.com/228539.html

And then the remix will work for you :)

[anonymous]

What a cool remix of that story! My favorite section was the bug one. (It baffled me for a while!)

[justskindeep]

I was a bit worried that wouldn't be clear, but I'm glad you were able to figure it out. I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[wolfshark]

Very nice!

[justskindeep]

Thank you!