Fic: The Angled Math of Shadows (Dark Chocolate Remix) [Yami no Matsuei; Hisoka/Tsuzuki; PG-13]

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Title: The Angled Math of Shadows (Dark Chocolate Remix)
Author: riko
Summary: A dead girl, a fall-out, and a cold Christmas in Kyushu.
Fandom: Yami no Matsuei
Pairing: Kurosaki Hisoka/Tsuzuki Asato
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: Entirely the property of Yoko Matsushita.
Original Story: Chocolatey Goodness by emerald_embersNotes: Contains some spoilers for the Kyoto Arc

Comments

[wordsofastory]

Oh, wow! This is an excellent story. I adore your characterization of Hisoka, and the ending is so sweet while still being understated. Very, very good.

[riko]

Well, if there's one thing I really wanted to get right, it was Hisoka, so it is relieving beyond measure to hear that I managed that. :D Thank you so much!

[emerald_embers]

Oh :D, oh, I am so smitten!

Because, because you've put a serious spin on things and weaved in a whole new story that feels like it could be a chapter in the manga, and it works so well, and you've kept all these little details and I love that :).

*huge hugs*

Thank you so much for this! It's well written and lovely and I couldn't have asked for more :D.

[riko]

Oh, I am so glad you liked it! Your original story was so adorable, and it got me thinking about so many different things - like, obviously, what had taken place to get them to that moment.

And there were so many great details! I, as you may have guessed, completely fell in love with your image of Tsuzuki-in-a-stupid-hat. Because it was hilarious and so, so him.

Anyway, I am very pleased you approve! Thank you for the lovely comment and for writing such a sweet story to begin with!

[oyceter]

Oh, I love this! I love the little case details woven in and poor Hisoka feeling entirely sixteen for once and his confusion and gradual acceptance of being at Point C.

[riko]

Thank you!

This is my first time doing anything approaching case-fic, and I've been nearly out of my mind worrying about whether I pulled it off - so it was fantastic to hear that you liked it. :) Thank you again!

[ranalore]

This is just awesome. The interplay of the case story and the developing relationship, and Hisoka's awkwardness and Tsuzuki taking things in stride.... It's so very them. I love it.

[riko]

Thank you! I'm very glad you liked the case and the characterization! Receiving this comment was a wonderful boost on a not-very-good day. Thanks for taking the time to make it! :)

[daegaer]

This is so lovely. Really beautiful.

[riko]

Thank you very much!