Two seconds without you, an eternity by your side (Brush and Ink Remix) [Bleach; RanGin, MatsuHitsu]

[ludakreusz]

Title: Two seconds without you, an eternity by your side (Brush and Ink Remix)
Author: tenebrisSummary: Twenty six points in time to shape the lifeline of Matsumoto Rangiku, Vice-Captain of the 10th Division

Comments

[aviss]

Wow, it's beautiful. I love what you've done with this, and I love Matsumoto and Hitsugaya's voice. I'm so glad you picked this fic (which happpens to be my favorite).

[tenebris]

...damn, it took me forever to get to this comment. Sorry! ;_;

And thank you, thank, thank you for liking it! When I went through your 'fic archive, this was the one that really jumped out at me--I loved Matsumoto's "feminist" ranting and the care that'd been put into it, the Gin who showed even more ambiguity and foxiness than the one in the manga, and your take on how Hitsugaya took over, as well. Remixing it was, let us say, an adventure. :) But it was fun to stretch myself, and it was exciting to try a new sort of structure, and I thank you for the opportunity. :)

[fmanalyst]

I love it too. It pulled me out of the insomniac funk I was in during the night. A quick editing note: In this paragraph, I think you mean tangible.

We left Kira and Momo at their respective Division houses and walked back to the Tenth together. The moon, though not full, was very bright, and it tinted everything white and silver. It made the Captain's hair seemed brighter, made his power seem more managible, and it took me a moment to figure out why.

[tenebris]

Aww, thank you! I'm glad to hear it--there's certainly enough words to lull one to sleep. ;)

Nope, it's supposed to be "manageable"--when I was spell checking, I messed up the choice on that word, and then couldn't find the section again. Thanks for pointing it out! Now I can go correct it. :)