Fic: The Cards You've Got (Love Lost Remix) [Pirates of the Caribbean; Jack Sparrow/Hector Barbossa;

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Title: The Cards You've Got (Love Lost Remix)
Author: artaxastra
Summary: Aboard the Black Pearl leaving Tortuga, Elizabeth reminds Jack of something he'd rather forget.
Pairing: Jack Sparrow/Hector Barbossa
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: non-con, bloodplay
Disclaimer: Not owned by me.
Original story: Love Lost by robes-of-earth

Comments

[erinya]

Not a pairing I particularly care for, but I do like how it's done here. I can easily see Jack playing the wounded coquette, his last card. And the remixed framing of the story, Elizabeth and Jack's likeness (of course I like that bit...)

[artaxastra]

I'm glad you liked it! Jack plays the wounded coquette well. Anything he needs to do.

And yes, the likeness between them!

[djarum99]

Love the symmetry of Jack and Elizabeth here. Jack would play any card he held, including the one up his...sleeve :) Excellent.

[artaxastra]

Jack would play any card he held, including the one up his...sleeve :)

Sleeve is one word for it! And yes, anything he needed to do. Elizabeth is just like him.

[wordsofastory]

Oooh, neat. I like the tension between the characters here. Very good story.

[artaxastra]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!