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Eden (The Naming of Things Remix) [Good Omens; Aziraphale/Crowley]

Apr 17, 2007 19:44

Title: Eden (The Naming of Things Remix)
Author: greenspine
Summary: There are some things angels and demons simply can't do.
Rating: Hard R/NC-17
Fandom: Good Omens
Title, Author and URL of original story: untitled default icon drabble by melandry
Notes: Thank you to Melandry, for providing such an absolutely adorable source! Or two - I grabbed a reference from ( Read more... )

fandom: good omens, character: crowley, original author: melandry, remix author: greenspine, pairing: aziraphale/crowley, character: aziraphale, rating: r

Comments 27

midnitemaraud_r April 22 2007, 20:15:20 UTC

So. Much. Love!! And the tree! I cannot stop laughing about the tree! They killed it dead! Hahahahaha! Wonderful and clever and funny and fun!!

(And footnote number 2 has me giggling. BPAL, I presume? *g*)

archon_mentha April 29 2007, 18:16:13 UTC

♥ Yes, BPAL. :) Thank you! I am so glad you liked it! *HUGS!*

melandry April 22 2007, 21:08:35 UTC

EEE! This remix is so awesome!

First off, I absolutely love the context you chose. It's a slightly unusual setting and one that really really works.

Aziraphale feeding Crowley's plants! As a Good WorkTM!

"It can't be the wrong thing," Crowley frowned. "You helped." ♥

the still air in the warm space between them smelled like wet feathers and Crowley, flash, expensive cologne, leather, and just a hint of brimstone. It was more comforting than a good dinner at the Ritz, and more enticing than the smell of old books. ♥ ♥ Who needs BPAL, anyway?

Oh god, the immediate aftermath of the bit covered by my drabble - I hadn't even thought of how Aziraphale would feel, for that moment, and you just make it so vivid here, and I felt so much sympathy for him, in that instant. Wonderful.

And then, well, ZOMG hot. I was especially struck by this line: And they never stopped kissing, not for a moment, fast and slow, the brush of lips and teeth, their tongues meeting, playing, and tasting each other.And HOLY SHIT they killed the Tree. I think you ( ... )

archon_mentha April 29 2007, 18:13:07 UTC

♥ I am thinking you're probably not surprised it is me. :) I am so, so, so glad you liked this Remix! :) Your writing is so warm and lovely.

melandry April 29 2007, 18:56:46 UTC

Actually, I am a terrible guesser about this kind of thing so I didn't even speculate. Total surprise! But definitely a good one. :)

I was so pleased to see that you picked a Good Omens drabble to remix, since I didn't even come close to qualifying in any fandom but Harry Potter, but GO is my favorite shiny fandom at the moment. And aw, thanks for the lovely compliment. *blushes*

trascendenza April 23 2007, 03:26:03 UTC

The Tree had been struck by lightning, split right down the middle. Already its branches were curling in on itself, dying.

"It's gone," Aziraphale said in wonder.

"Good job of it, too." Crowley smiled, and he sat up and took Aziraphale's hand in his own.

!!!!!!!

Also, footnotes = love.

archon_mentha April 29 2007, 18:17:44 UTC

:D Thank you - I'm very glad you liked it!

fleshdress April 23 2007, 19:46:02 UTC

I thought this was absolutely adorable, in the best possible ways. I love Aziraphale's lost feeling without Crowley, I love the image of the raindrops on their wings and I love love love the destroyed tree. This was brilliant. :)

archon_mentha April 29 2007, 18:18:58 UTC

You are lovely and wonderful and amazing and THANK YOU! ♥ *squishes*

shadowvalkyrie April 23 2007, 21:09:18 UTC

Gorgeous. Very sweet, but not too much. And the rain and wings make it very poetic.
Great respect for keeping the tone funny as well!

archon_mentha April 29 2007, 18:20:00 UTC

Thank you for that feedback - I rarely write fluff and I had been worried it was too much! I'm so glad you enjoyed. :)