Chaque fois que tu t'en vas (The Tight Enough To Hurt Remix) [Loveless, Ritsuka/Soubi]

[dr_who_dre]

Title: Chaque fois que tu t'en vas (The Tight Enough To Hurt Remix)
Author: allira_dream
Summary: Ritsuka knows he has to go away, before Soubi burns him.
Rating: R/NC17
Fandom: Loveless.
Warnings: Shota, angst.
Spoilers: Up to the fight against the female Zero.
Title, Author and URL of original story: Until the bright light of morning makes us wake by shikishi.

Comments

[inksheddings]

Oh, this is so heartbreaking. Makes me ache for both the characters, but especially Ritsuka, because Soubi is the adult and he should be the one taking responsibility here. But I suppose Soubi never really was given the chance to grow up, but that also means he shouldn't be taking it away from Ritsuka.

*sighs*

Wonderfully poignant story. Lovely remix.

[dr_who_dre]

Thank you! I've long thought that, as heartbreaking as it is, if there's an adult in that relationship, it's actually Ritsuka, which just makes my heart break for them.

Thank you for reading it!

[shikishi]

:D

Oh how happy I am you went with a Loveless remix. and I adore the intercepted spacing and flashbacks and the fact that, as is always the case with Soubi and Ritsuka, Seimei plays an important and sometimes massive role.

You did an amazing job, remixer. *goes to re-read*

[shikishi]

*relieved* I'm so very glad you liked it! I really, really loved your story, and I'm glad you think I made yours justice =)

[shikishi]

again, thank you very much!

[allira_dream]

You're welcome!! ^^

[kyasuriin]

this is such a beautiful remix. I usually don't like the use of parentheses but the way you've done them really makes it work. Very interesting spin on the original, adding Seimei. Well done :)

[kyasuriin]

Thank you! The original story seemed to be all about the things that weren't being said, so in this case I wanted to try the opposite. I'm so glad it worked for you! ^^

- remixer.