Like You Touch Me (The Skin Hungry Remix) [Stargate: Atlantis; McKay/Sheppard; PG-13]

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Title: Like You Touch Me (The Skin Hungry Remix)
Author: cupidsbow
Summary: It's hard to lie with touch, but John and Rodney give it their best shot.
Rating: PG-13
Fandom: Stargate: Atlantis
Pairing: McKay/Sheppard
Disclaimer: Stargate: Atlantis in no way belongs to me.
Original story: Touch Me Like I Touch You by dogeared.

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Comments

[wildestranger]

Oh this is beautiful. Love your style in this. ;)

[cupidsbow]

Thank you!

[dogeared]

Wheee! Oh, everything's flipped so cleverly, and Rodney blinked, blinked again, seeing John anew: that burst of crystalline clarity re-writing everything--the clutch of John's fingers against his skin, the fond concern in his face, the way his gaze flickered across Rodney's mouth, the way he said, "Rodney?"--and oh is asdfa;ljk perfect and makes me ridiculously happy, ohhh boys. Thank you!

[cupidsbow]

I'm so glad you like the flip! Your writing style is so subtle, and I was worried that my style would overwhelm your plot.

[minnow1212]

Just gorgeous!

[cupidsbow]

Thank you!

[siriaeve]

Oh, this is utterly lovely.

[cupidsbow]

Thank you!

[sheafrotherdon]

I love how deftly you flip this, and still retain the poignancy of the original - the sense of lost opportunities and time that perhaps now, they can make up for. Lovely!

[cupidsbow]

Your comment made me very happy because I was worried about the huge difference in dogeared's writing style compared to mine. I'm glad the remix worked so well for you.