A Secret Between Them (And All Who Would Behold It) [Bleach; Ichigo/Rukia, Various]

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Title: A Secret Between Them (And All Who Would Behold It)
Author: jaina
Summary: Those who hold their secrets the closest often don't see the ones all around them.
Rating: PG
Fandom: Bleach
Spoilers: Reference to events fairly early in post-Soul Society arc
Title, Author and URL of original story: A Secret Between Them by tenebris

Thanks to raynos for the beta, hallowd

Comments

[tenebris]

I can't even leave a coherent comment on this right now, 'cause...EEEEE. EEEE. Other perspectives fic are some of my favorite and oh man, you got ALL of them in there: Chad and Karin and Renji and Kon and ISSHIN EEEEE.

On a more serious note, you took a fic I've always had mixed feelings on and gave it some gravity. Which is just awesome. Thank you very much!

[oyceter]

AWWWW! I love this! I love the voices for all of them, how it's centered around a romance but it's actually about family and friends. And your Karin voice made me snort out loud in laughter half a dozen times.

[ficwize]

Wooooooooow.

This was so good!!! You really captured all the different personalities and you captured a sweet and innocent side to Ichigo and Rukia's relationship. And you really did an excellent job with everyone's personalities. I was so impressed with the section on Renji, but I think you captured them all perfectly.

Beautiful!

[mousapelli]

I really like this, the switching POVs, but the ones I liked most of all were Karin's and Kon's.

Kon's just cracked me up, especially his complete suckerdom for girls of any type, but was also sweet because he really is attached to Rukia.

Karin's was sort of lonely and wistful, which is perfect for her, because she's in a sort of awkward stage in her family, and understands just enough that she doesn't really understand anything.

Very nice, I loved it!