Title: Together (the knit my heart/nerves of steel remix)
Author:
xylodemonSummary: Ginny decides Harry isn't going to get away that easily.
Pairing: Harry/Ginny
Rating: R
Fandom: Harry Potter
Notes: An author's rendition of
Together, by
krabapple. Thanks to
foreword and
pixystick for the beta.
(
together (the knit my heart/nerves of steel remix) )
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You did a great job with Harry and Ginny. Ginny's determination and Harry's stubbornness are perfect here, and I love the way they combine to make for such lovely awkwardness in the middle of the story -- His palm was warm and slightly sweaty, and his stubborn fingers needed coaxing to twist around her own. But of course despite his noble intentions they both do want to be together, and you captured that very perfectly. I loved the confrontation in the bedroom, where Harry snaps at her but Ginny ultimately convinces him. He's not going to give up on his concern for her safety, but Ginny will never give up on the war either.
The supporting cast was great, and all the little touches like Fleur's dress and the gardenias and the sagging dinner table really made the Burrow a real presence in this story.
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