Fic: One for Sorrow (Sam!angst Remix) [Supernatural; Sam, Dean; R]

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Title: One for Sorrow (Sam!angst Remix)
Author: embroiderama
Summary: Dean's missing. Sam's searching.
Fandom: Supernatural
Characters: Sam, Dean
Rating: R
Disclaimer: Kripke's, not mine
Original story: Sunday's Child by ellipsisblack
Notes: Thank you to my lovely betas, elanurel and missyjack! Also, this is a little awkward, but the original story is wincest (Sam/Dean), while this remix

Comments

[ellipsisblack]

I love that you picked up Sam's POV in this fic. I never really thought about it when I wrote the original. And I LOVE that you brought in a counting rhyme. I kink majorly to rhymes in fics anyway, so to have that combined with the remix in general makes me so so happy. Thank you, O Anonymous One!

[embroiderama]

Oh, I'm so glad you liked the use of the counting rhyme! The idea of using it popped into my head, and it just seemed so right considering your penchant for them. :) One of the best things to come out of remix was getting to read Sunday's Child--I hadn't read it before, and it's just so wonderful. I'm glad I got the opportunity to play in your sandbox again!

[ellipsisblack]

Oh, I LOVED the counting rhyme, hell yeah. ♥

I'm so glad you got to play in my sandboxes again. ♥ You always make such pretty stuff. And I'm glad you remixed this fic, because Sunday's Child is definitely one of my favourite things I've written.

*hugs*

[stephanometra]

Oh, Sammy.

I agree with Miss Elle - the way you picked up Sam's POV is really an awesome counterpoint to the original, and I love that they both have these little nursery-rhyme rituals, because it's so them to be doing exactly the same thing without realizing the other is doing it, without talking about it or anything. Excellent work.

[embroiderama]

because it's so them to be doing exactly the same thing without realizing the other is doing it, without talking about it or anything

Thank you so much! I thought that was fitting--that Sam would have learned that from Dean without realizing where he'd got it.

[merihn]

Oh, what a lovely remix. I really enjoyed seeing it from Sam's POV and you described it very well.

Great job.
♥

[embroiderama]

Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it!

[lilacsigil]

The Sam POV is terrific in this, but I love the incorporation of the rhyme here, to counterpoint Dean's in the original - Dean used his rhyme to turn inwards and keep going in his captivity, Sam uses his to gauge and judge and explore. (I know the rhyme as "One for sorrow, two for joy, three for a girl, four for a boy", BTW!)

[embroiderama]

Thank you so much!

(I know the rhyme as "One for sorrow, two for joy, three for a girl, four for a boy", BTW!)

So do I, but I found this other version when I was doing a little research, and I liked the sound of it. :)

[roguewords]

Very cool.

I really enjoyed this.

[embroiderama]

Thank you so much!