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kassrachel April 24 2007, 19:08:59 UTC
Disturbing and fragmented and strangely beautiful, like River herself.

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lorax April 29 2007, 17:47:05 UTC
Aww. Thank you so much! The original was very much like that, and I was trying to echo that while still staying close to Simon, so I'm glad it worked for you!

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meinterrupted April 25 2007, 14:15:08 UTC
Wow. Just... WOW. This is so amazing! It's poetic and beautiful, and captures the essence of my story perfectly. I love it! Thank you so much!

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lorax April 29 2007, 17:48:49 UTC
Oh thank goodness. lol. I LITERALLY started three different remixes for you before finally deciding this one wanted to be redone. And it was the most traditional of the three - in that it was a simple POV change - but it just seemed to work the best for me.

I'm really glad it worked for you, and thank you for giving me such a lovely base to remix!

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redshoeson April 27 2007, 01:33:19 UTC
Ooo, this is lovely. I adore the original, and this remix definitely does it justice. The guilt is just palpable - chills all the way. Thanks for an excellent read!

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lorax April 29 2007, 17:49:45 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm glad that you think it holds up to the original! Thank you for the comment!

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