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lady_m_319 March 19 2012, 04:04:02 UTC
Dean explained the consequences to Ben. Ben chose to ignore them. Naughty Ben put Dean in a bad position. When Dean was doubting himself, liked how Dean looked back at times with John and thought about how his father would have handled him and Sammy. The text to Lisa was cute. Nicely written.

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remisfriend26 March 21 2012, 23:50:07 UTC
Ahhh, thank you so very very much! I wasn't entirely sure how to portray Dean and Lisa's relationship in my mind, so i'm really glad the text worked! Also glad Ben and Dean's relationship and the way his behaviour was dealt with were realistic/enjoyable to read. I'm so glad you enjoyed, thank you so much for the kind feedback! :D

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capricorn86 March 20 2012, 23:29:24 UTC
Yay! I was excited to see your journal update, hehe. The Dean and Ben pairing is my second favourite, and you`ve written it really well. Ben is such a brat! lol Nice to see Dean taking care of his attitude.
I too loved Dean texting Lisa (and putting xx at the end! aww!)
Great story, hope you`re doing well. I miss seeing you around the comm. :)

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remisfriend26 March 21 2012, 23:38:37 UTC
Eek, hello! Haha, it's true - i'm back! Gave myself a wee back after the comm stuff but i've started a john and sam fic next :) Aw, THANK YOU SO MUCH!! Your praise makes me so happy! Too kind, it's making me blush, hehe! Lol, i'm glad the text worked! I was hoping it'd show Dean's softer side instead of the hardass nature. :P yeah, i'm doing pretty good thanks. Plodding along, how are you getting on? I'm missing you and the comm and the others too, feels so weird not talking to you guys much. Are you back writing now?

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capricorn86 March 22 2012, 18:15:01 UTC
!!! John and Sam fic !!! :D *runs around in circles screaming excitedly* hahaha yay! They`re my two top favourite characters, and the pairing (and relationship) I just can`t get enough of, lol. I look forward to seeing it, is it from a prompt? How old is Sam? :)

Aww, you deserve all the praise I can give, I always enjoy your stories, and you have a writing style I truly like.

Glad to hear you`re doing well. I`m doing fine.
Yeah, I`m back to writing.. sort of, hehe. Still taking it slow and easy. Started working on a Bobby fic yesterday, we`ll see where it takes me.

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brassband777 March 23 2012, 17:02:47 UTC
I hardly ever check my friends page, so I've been checking your journal regularly to see if you'd posted anything new. Hee hee. I was really chuffed to find this :) I thought it was really sweet that Dean didn't spank Ben on the bare, because he was only such a brat, because he wanted to spend the day with his dad - AWWW! I enjoyed the memories of Dean and sam's childhood too. Loved the image of dean carrying him and rocking him at the end :)

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remisfriend26 March 23 2012, 17:29:22 UTC
Awww, really? You're such a sweetie!! Made me really happy to read this :) it makes me all warm and fuzzy that you guys haven't totally forgotten about me after all the comm crap! Haha, thank you :D I always imagine Dean and Sammy as being less strict than their Daddy would be but respectful of him having to kick Winchester butt lots ;) i'm so glad it was okay though, and realistic when he was rocking Ben, wasn't sure how that'd come across!!

Also, keep checking haha - I'm back now!! Needed a break but I think i'm ready to roll now! Writing a fic with John and Sam next, I think, heehee! Missing you guys lots!

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winchesterlove2 June 25 2012, 15:56:47 UTC
aw poor ben just wanted time with Daddy! but he knows better than to be a brat! great story :) (COME BACK TO THE COMM MISS LEGAL ADULT!!! PLEASE!!! <333333333333)

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Ben was told what would happen ext_1517452 February 10 2015, 19:16:49 UTC
Poor Ben but he was told by his dad what would happen if he miss behave and dad flowers though thanks

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