Fast Lane to Pain (Part Four)

Jan 24, 2012 00:35

Same details as before for the other parts to this fic though less swearing/angst/spanking!
I own nothing, all belongs to EK and team!

Well, here's the ending... Hope you enjoy and that it's not a really rubbish ending :/

-Ruth

Eventually the door to the bedroom opened slowly, revealing a teary, red eyed Mary who threw herself into her strong, safe, ( Read more... )

mary, au!verse, sam winchester, john, hand

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capricorn86 January 23 2012, 00:42:39 UTC
Very sweet. I think this was a nice conclusion to the story.
Loved the tenderness between Mary and Dean here.
Really loved the nice family time at the end too. :)
I think you did a great job filling my prompt! You wrote a much longer story than I had expected, but you pulled it off nicely. Thank you.

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winchesterlove2 January 23 2012, 02:30:22 UTC
really great ending. my favorite part? '“Deanybop? Honey?” She opened her arms to her son who, much to her relief, ran straight into them, hugging her tight. “Oh, baby boy. My precious little Ace, Momma’s got you…'

I stayed strong. I was granite reading through this!

aw who'm i kidding? i was not---I TOTALLY MELTED! :3

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brassband777 January 25 2012, 18:02:08 UTC
Loved this ending and how it brought everything together to a happy conclusion.
ADORED the endearment 'Deanybop' - that melted my heart. Hee hee.
I was so glad that Mary apologised to Dean and explained why she acted that way. I also liked that if he behaved, Dean might be able to earn back the owed bedtime spankings.
And they got their family picnic at the end - YAY!

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