Fast Lane to Pain (Part Two)

[remisfriend26]

Title: The Fast Lane to Pain (part two)

Pairings: John, Mary, Dean (16), Sam (12), OC Rosie (mentioned)

Plot: John and Mary deal with the aftermath of Dean’s near disappearing act and foolish damage of the Impala while Dean goes on his first date while driving the car himself. While John’s whupping some major naughty Winchester butt, new factors come

Comments

[brassband777]

The image of Dean jumping out of bed in a hurry when he knew his dad was coming up made me giggle. Hee hee. Awww- poor Sammy. I can symathise with his reaction towards Dean, as he must have been frantic with worry.
As for Dean blurting out he was about to have sex....what a good way to give your parents a heart attack! that was definitely not Dean's smartest move. ;)

[remisfriend26]

LOL, I giggled when I wrote it; it's such a typical thing for kids to do, I could properly picture it, hehe :P
Ahaha, I know, but is Dean ever really thinking that much where his downstairs brain's concerned? Unlikely, haha ;)
I just hope I'm not making it too harsh on him :/

[winchesterlove2]

though it may not have been Dean's best move to be THAT MUCH forthcoming props to him for taking it like a man and telling the truth despite consequences. poor dean though cuz that is one hell of a punishment.

[remisfriend26]

yeah, I feel real bad for writing something where he's in that much trouble, but I guess it's just cause I can imagine Mary being the kinda Mom who wants her sons to proper respect woman and stuff and so I'm going on the whole spin of Mary being more upset about it then John (after all, surely he understands having an in tune downstairs brain :P) I'm hoping to add a third part tonight since I'm feeling better, I'm just not sure how to continue cause I don't want John to seem too strict :(

[remisfriend26]

Well, that's assuming I should keep going cause I'm not sure if I like this so far or not..

[capricorn86]

I laughed too when I read Dean suddenly felt very awake when he heard John coming, lol!
I liked this part, especially when Mary came in the bedroom, hehehe.. Poor Dean though!

[remisfriend26]

Heehee! Thank you! I'm glad it was funny for other people except me haha :P
I'm not even going to lie, I always feel so relieved when you comment saying you like a fic I write! I uploaded part three just there but I'm not sure if I like it, it feels a bit tense :/
Thank you so much though, glad you enjoyed it!

[capricorn86]

Going to read part 3 now :)