Always a hero.

Dec 19, 2011 17:07

Author:  Remisfriend26
Word Count:  1594
Characters: John W, Dean W, Sam W, OCs for storyline.
Summary/Prompt:  Would you consider writing a story in which Dean track his brother who went into the backyard, to hide behind trees and find out that Sammy is actually spanking his teddy bear in a mock re-creation of a spanking Dean received from his dad.
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wee! chester, john winchester, sam winchester, dean winchester, dean spanks sam

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spankedbyspike December 18 2011, 18:45:21 UTC

Wow, that was cute! All characters just so loveable...

I couldn't have written my own prompt and here you are making it happen!!!!

I loved the layers and the kindness underlying the storylines, and the end was just beautiful.

Thanks for this beautiful present, you made my Sunday!

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remisfriend26 December 18 2011, 21:58:59 UTC
Thank you so so much! When you gave me the prompt last night I actually pulled a total blank and was like How on earth will I do that? But it was a fun challenge, once I started it just happened. But I figured that as fairly young kids it would be easier for them to react...

I'm so glad you enjoyed it, I'd love to write another one based on your prompts if you have any more! I also enjoyed exploring John as the kind of middle man instead of being the big bad guy giving people into trouble.

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spankedbyspike December 19 2011, 06:53:30 UTC

You know I did not expect you to write it right away, I would have tried to think and write the prompt better. However, you did a great job with it, better than what I imagined.

So thanks for giving me a story I could love from beginning to end.

As for another prompt, like Capricorn said it would be great to have a good idea of what you like and what is a no-no, cause I'd like to see a Het spanking story and it's nor very popular on our site, so I rarely get to read those.

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remisfriend26 December 19 2011, 13:50:44 UTC
I didn't expect to write it straight away either, thought it would take weeks to work out how to do it so I was quite surprised when I wrote it watching tv in a couple of hours...

Excellent! i prefer the stuff I said to capricorn about, but I can give most things I try :) I don't like doing slash stuff or incest, so that's a no go. But I could maybe give some het a try? Never tried it before... i like the intereactions between parents and kids, though I don't specifically mind which ones :)
Hope that helps!

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atalantaj December 18 2011, 18:55:44 UTC
Aw, poor Dean. I felt bad for him, and understand him getting upset at what he must have thought of as betrayal with Sam immitating the spanking Dean got. I felt bad for Sam too, I doubt he expected his brother to spank him. I thought this was pretty realistic for children. Children are pretty thoughtless at times, and make fun over things that really shouldn't be laughed at. Nice job.

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remisfriend26 December 18 2011, 22:01:39 UTC
Thank you! I'm so glad that their reactions made sense, it was quite hard to try and show Dean's normal side, yet show how irrational he is as a child, and how clueless Sammy is. I have to say thanks to SpankedbySpike though for coming up with the prompt, it was definitely a challenge!!

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capricorn86 December 18 2011, 22:53:33 UTC
This was a unique and interesting prompt, and you did an amazing job. I would never have been able to write something like this. Very well done. :D

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remisfriend26 December 19 2011, 01:41:50 UTC
Thank you very much! Not even going to lie, when I read the prompt I thought there was no way I could pull off something like that, but actually it was really good fun to write! Thank you though :) :) I've finished another of your prompts, uploading now... (too much time on my hands the last couple of days, haha!)

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capricorn86 December 19 2011, 09:08:46 UTC
Oh, awesome! :D I`ll go read it now. I haven`t had any time for writing these past few days, so it`s great that others are keeping busy, hehe.

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brassband777 December 19 2011, 09:30:52 UTC
I felt really sorry for both Dean and Sammy here. Dean's feelings, reactions and embarrassment were totally realistic and understandable, but of course, Sammy wasn't old enough to know better. Loved the scene with John comforting Dean in the bedroom. I'm addicted to weechester fics. Hee hee

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remisfriend26 December 19 2011, 13:52:15 UTC
Thank you! haha, I love the wee!chester fics too, the boys are so cute to write at that age! I also always imagine John being less gruff at that age, same with AU's where mary's alive. But Sam and Dean are so cute as kids, heehee :)

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winchesterlove2 December 23 2011, 05:10:19 UTC
aw this nearly made me cry! so cute

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remisfriend26 December 25 2011, 20:40:03 UTC
I cried when I wrote it, my heart broke for Dean even though I could totally imagine it!

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