An Apology?

Sep 22, 2010 07:26


Over at the Twelve Colonies Battlestar gaming community, Team Colonial One (which I always think of as Laura's team) is getting crushed by the Cylons and Galactica.    I help with the challenges there, and here is a challenge I want to do soon, but I figured I'd test it on you guys.

Your task:   To write a Laura poem in the manner of William Carlos Williams' This is Just to Say.

This poem is also sometimes called Apology.   Laura had a lot she could apologize for -- although I never remember her apologizing!

Here's the poem:
This Is Just to Say
by William Carlos Williams
I have eaten
the plums
that were in
the icebox

and which
you were probably
saving
for breakfast

Forgive me
they were delicious
so sweet
and so cold

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