This is lovely. You've got the characters down (I could totally hear Gus in everything you had him saying...lol). I'm really excited to find out what happens (particularly Lassy's response to Shawn's...well...interesting request).
You have got a few minor typos throughout (quick re-read'll catch 'em).
Anyway! Wonderful work and I really can't wait for more!
Looking forward to more. The show should totally go in this direction at some point. I'd love to see Shawn dragging Lassiter off to a gay strip club for real. Good stuff, thanks for posting.
The show should totally go in this direction at some point
*G* Oh it so should! Even if doesn't end with Shawn and Lassiter having hot steamy sex [which they will at some point in this story^^] it would be so worth it just for the look on Lassy's face.
Hopefully I'll get another chapter up today. I was really iffy about the flashback part, I'm so glad you liked it and that it worked. :D:D Thank you for commenting!
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You have got a few minor typos throughout (quick re-read'll catch 'em).
Anyway! Wonderful work and I really can't wait for more!
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It is so nerve wracking writing characters for the first time, I'm glad it sounded believable.
I'll go through and fix it, thanks for the heads up and Thanks again for the comment.^^
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More will be coming asap.
LOVE the icon btw it's hilarious!
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*G* Oh it so should! Even if doesn't end with Shawn and Lassiter having hot steamy sex [which they will at some point in this story^^] it would be so worth it just for the look on Lassy's face.
Thanks for commenting!
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PS: Love the icon btw. It is adorable!
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And thank you!
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I was really iffy about the flashback part, I'm so glad you liked it and that it worked. :D:D
Thank you for commenting!
PS: Your banner is ♥
Thanks!^^
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