Week Two - Spoons

[rejeneration]

Warning: Language? =D I swear. That's just me! Maybe don't read from work. Or do? Your choice

Comments

[kathrynrose]

Nice!

[rejeneration]

Gracias! =D

[tijuanagringo]

Frightening. Suspenseful. Powerful. I am also quietly saying thank you for those G.D. spoons. Oh yeah.
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OMG you just saved a damsel in distress!!!!

[rejeneration]

LOL! You're so sweet!

Also, I'm a badass! ;D

[rayaso]

Very well done, and yes, you did save a damsel in distress, who, through her telephone, managed to save you as well. Not a good situation to be in, but I'm glad it ended well.

[rejeneration]

I've walked into so many similar situations, and while I've never taken down a guy with a spoon, I have kicked my share of ass. And I'm still walking and talking about it. But, ... oh the stories.

That's what intrigues me about the premise, I suppose. Walking into the same old cow pasture, time and again, you can blame the field for the shit on your shoes. =D Sometimes, it's not always your day. Sometimes when you save someone, they have to save you, too!

Just good ol' fun with logic circles. ;D

Thank you for reading and commenting!

[kickthehobbit]

Ha, I love this. :D

[rejeneration]

Yay!! Thank you, teamie! <3

[alycewilson]

Gripping tale! Loved the ending.

[rejeneration]

You are sweet!

I thought the ending was ridiculously weak =( I just, I tried working it a dozen ways, and couldn't get it to rest more comfortably.. if you know what I mean?

Thank you, Alyce! =D

[alycewilson]

For me it worked because it was a deux es machina moment that gave him a chance to reflect and to learn.

[rejeneration]

I read this and I just sighed a long sigh of relief. You know what's funny, you actually gave me a whole new way to see my own character! ;D You go, girl! Thank you!