GW - Cloneness - chapter 13

[reiyel]

My bad, I totally forgot to archive it here. Sorry sorry sorry.

I don't know if I'll start writing this again -- it's heavily based on a RP log, so it's not exactly difficult, but there are many holes to fill... but, hrrm, I don't know. I'll try, but no promises.

Comments

[rochan01]

yay, thanks. I somehow missed the very last bit.

[corpus_yaoi]

Oh, man! All this waiting for the other shoe to drop, for something bad to happen. All this time, expecting the Vultures to swoop in and cause major trouble and that last line:

he decided to ignore the damp red spot on Heero's shirt.

What's wrong with Heero? He was getting blood noses before when he got headaches (which have now stopped again? or just not an issue any more?) Being a clone was also a point of interest...they had to be clones of someone, so I was thinking this Heero was the original Heero and he was the mold for the other clones (well, other 01 clones?) and was Odin's son (hence, Odin's special treatment).

I can't believe they got out of the city alright! But again, with this great dystopian future, it seems like the good luck will only go so far, and it's one thing to get out of the city, but another to get all the way to the farm.

Thanks for sharing, I really enjoyed reading!