Fandom: Bleach; Gen-fic

[reivenesque]

Fandom: Bleach.
Title: Innocent Sin.
Character(s): Renji, Byakuya.
Clasification: Gen.
Note: Requested on fic_on_demand.

Summary: An innocent position a captain and his vice find themselves in can easily be misunderstood, especially by those unwary. Rukia was blissfully obvious when she stepped into the 6th division office that day.

Comments

[sandamazwich]

XD I read this before on ff.net I think, still love it! ^_^

[woolfred]

LOLOLOLOLOLOL ;D Awesome, just awesome! Grat job!
Poor Rukia xD

[ganja_chan]

HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! OMG that was so funny! It made my day, and the line “Of every able bodied shinigami in Soul Society, she picks a loudmouth, half-human dimwit who’s named after a pink fruit.” was SO like Byakuya's jokes! Rukia's reaction was also perfect.
And though the theme with misunderstanding of back massaging is quite well-worn, you managed to refresh it in a way that it seems brand new XD
*gives you a chocolate cookie*

[heukya]

Wahahaha.... Not the first time I've read others mistaking the scene but that was so funny, not to mention the lines seem to perfectly fit in either situation. Bya saying he'll teach Rukia, that was priceless. Poor girl, doesn't know what she's missing from her brother. haha.

[youkohiei_fan]

XDD