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reirukawa

Parallel Lines

Oct 01, 2009 15:28

Parallel Lines

Once there was a powerful warrior from the clan of Tsao-Le. He was famous throughout the land, his prowess in battle second to none. He was handsome too, and maidens from all parts of the world fell at his feet. Meanwhile, in the faraway east, a lovely maiden resides. A healer, a priestess and a candidate for the vessel of the ( Read more... )

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cnice job anonymous October 1 2009, 08:07:17 UTC

cool so serious but nice first time to read this

galing! anonymous October 1 2009, 08:10:29 UTC

pwede na maging author ng book
smart!

very creative transforms anonymous October 1 2009, 08:13:29 UTC

writer personality and mood to that of the characters
good depth of sorry

-_- ang lalim.. anonymous October 1 2009, 08:14:52 UTC

hahaha... di ko mahukay tol... ang tindi.. ang lalim naman nun... parang napakaperfect na sana nung love story nila, kaso di sila nagkita... (tama ba pagkakaintindi ko...?) haaaayyy.. napaka masalimuot aman nun... amf.... parang kami ni alvin at kayo ni cent... isang malaking masalimuot na pagmamahalan, kaso nga lang, mukang tayo lang aman ang nagmahal... sila kasi may iba... uhm... ang cute nung story... ang galing... pwede ka ng gumawa ng novel muh mismo, gawa muh aman ako ng sakin minsan kapag may extra time kaw... hahaha... joke, ero ang ganda talaga nung story, sana nga lang nagkita na sila para aman kahit sila manlang maging masaya kahit tayo hindi.. hahaha.. ay, masaya na pala ako ulit.... i love him ulit... :) uhm... makakahanap din ikaw ng para sayo... :) i miss you so much tol... :) salamat sa pagdamay sakin.... :-*

Re: -_- ang lalim.. reirukawa October 1 2009, 08:20:14 UTC

*ehem ehem*. pwedeng i-censor yung mga names?!hahaha

a montage anonymous October 1 2009, 08:16:05 UTC

good work auhor jhie!